Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
Write an essay of about 300 words discussing this issue with the title given.
Do Computers Make Our Life Easier?
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Do Computers Make Our Life Easier?
Some people say that the invention of computers is one of the greatest humankind’s inventions. However, other people think that computers makes their life more stressful. I agree with those people who think that computers have brought many benefits and play a very important role in our modem life.
First of all, every company nowadays uses a computer to store its data and make different kinds of operations. It is very difficult to imagine life without computers. A company would have to store millions of papers and documents. Moreover, a customer would have to wait hours to check his balance or get a piece of information about his transactions at his bank, while an employee was looking through those papers. Another important aspect of this is that people are able to type all their information, make corrections, print or send documents using computers. It makes life much easier. One can spend the rest of the time watching TV with his family or working on something new.
Second of all, computers provided a great means of communication—the Internet. 1 think it is the easiest and cheapest way to get in touch with relatives, friends, business colleagues, etc. Nowadays the world becomes smaller and smaller. When I was a litter child, I could not imagine that it would be possible to communicate with people from all around the world in such on easy way. A person can get latest news, become friends with someone from another country, find his old friends, and ask for a piece of advice, etc.
Finally, in addition to these practical benefits people can shop without leaving their house. They just use an Internet access, a computer and their cards to make a payment. It is kind of difficult to imagine that a few years ago people had to spend their time in lines buying rickets. Now, a person can choose a destination, company, dale and time and get tickets delivered to his door. I think it is amazing.
To sum up, I believe that computers make our lives easier. They change our attitude towards life. I think with the invention of computers people become closer and friendlier.
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1、本部分满分60分,按(A)较高要求和(B)基本要求按档次给分。
本部分分值不得出现0.5分;作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分,但不重复扣分。
(A)较高要求
笫一档:60-51分作文切题,内容充实,结构清晰、完整,语言通顺,表达清楚,用词准确,没有语法错误,很少有拼写错误。写作的用词量不少于250词。
笫二档:50-41分作文切题,内容充实,结构清晰、完整,语言通顺,表达清楚,用词基本得当,有个別语法错误和拼写错误。写作的用词量不少于200词。
第三档:40-31分作文基本切题,内容较充实,结构较完整,语言较通顺,表达较清楚, 有些用词不当,但可以理解,有少数语法错误和拼写错误。写作的用词量不少于150词。
(B)基本要求
第一档:30-21分作文没有明显偏离主题;结构基本清晰;语言错误不严重影响内容表达,写作的用词量不少于100词。
第二档:20-11分作文不切题,结构不清晰,语言不通顺,表达不连贯,有较多得语法错误和拼写错误。写作的用词量不少于50词。
第三档:10-0分仅能说几个不关联的单词。