In some society sports and entertainment stars have higher value than professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers. Do you think it is a good or bad social phenomenon? Write a short argumentative essay about 300 words to discuss this social phenomenon. In your writing, give a title, underline your thesis and number your paragraphs.
Who have higher value： stars or professionals?①Nowadays, athletes and movie stars in. some society make more money more quickly than professionals such as doctors, nurses and school teachers. Though this seems no fair to many people, there are good reasons for such phenomenon. By laws of market, the higher demand for certain goods or services, the higher value such goods or services would have. Movie stars or famous athletes entertain a nation or even the whole world. They satisfy the needs of very large populations with greater efficiency than medical professionals or teachers who usually work for one hospital or school. As a result, stars are able to create greater value for their employers and deserve higher income.②However, I think that the real value of many stars is superficial. Unlike other professionals, stars are made to cater the constantly changing pop culture. No matter how popular they are now, the stars would be forgotten as time goes by. Professionals like doctors and teachers create the true value for their society. Their experience and knowledge drive our society forward. By contrast, stars create demand and make their fortune mainly by making news lo attract attention.③Due to the powerful influences of show business，many young people are more interested in getting famous and rich overnight than working hard in more worthy professions. Such ideas and action would make young people,throw away their ambition to become good doctors or lawyers.④To conclude, the Value of stars is more superficial and does not form. the real value of a society. The true value of our world is created by people with real knowledge and skills like doctors and teachers. We should not Encourage young people 10 waste lime and money being stairs instead of working hard to be someone more useful to their society.
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1.本题满分60分，按五个档次给分，其中36分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2.写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
3.作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
4.分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档：60—55分
作文切埋，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词准确，没有语法错误，很少有拼写错误。
第二档：54—46 分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词基本得当，有个别语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档：45—36分
作文基本切题，内容较充实，结构较清晰、完整，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有些用词不当，但可以理解，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档：35—18分
文不切题，内容不充实，结构不清晰，语言不通顺，表达不连贯，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
