Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points).
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【参考范文】
As is clearly reflected in the above pie chart, the purpose of students travelling demonstrates obvious differences in one college of China. According to the data given, the purpose of enjoying the beautiful landscape takes a comparatively large share, accounting for 37%, while that of relieving pressure also takes away 33% of the whole proportion.
What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this phenomenon. To start with, with the rapid development of economy, people, including college students, are becoming increasingly wealthy, which enables them to afford the once-deemed-expensive oversea traveling. In order to enjoy the charming landscape all around the world, a large proportion of students choose to travel abroad. What’s more, along with the ever-accelerating improvement of economy and society is also the ever increasing work and life pressure. Consequently, the purpose of relieving pressure ranks the second among all the purposes for folks to travel around the world.
In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that admiring the scenery and alleviating pressure will still be the main purpose for people to arrange a traveling to other countries.
【写作点拨】
写作时,首段要进行图表描述:将某高校学生旅行目的进行对比描述,主要呈现最典型数据,如占比最高的数据描述。中间段进行原因分析,分两方面解释图表现象形成的原因。结尾段进行总结,给出评论和看法。语言表达要尽量体现语言结构的变化和灵活应用。